SimonGhoul's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lucario Dating Sim 2]

God no, just stop
Actually, is nice that you tried, but this is just..... ugh, please tell me this is not yaoi, I'll give you 2.5 for trying

and I think I understand it was actually hard for you to make the controls, your programming in controls is to basic that you can compare it with slides, you could do it with qwerty but well I think you just need more practice in programming and also in art because you draw as horrible as me (maybe I draw better, who knows) but you just keep practicing and you will be amazing at drawing, and don't expect good reviews with that drawing, but when you get better them I guess you can expect that, from the thumbnail the first thing I was thinking was that this was going to be cancer and it is, but meh you will get better, never give up

Also, something that you can change right now is the category, this is not dating at all, this is a shooter, the type of shooter with ships, is a love history but still that's not the genre
In the description you can just put that this is a vertical flight shooter or whatever shooter goes here (I have no time right now to investigate for you) with a love story, a novel
Good look, I think I will drink some clorox

(And this is how you make a nice hateful comment being 100% legit)
Note:if this is not yaoi, thank god! and forgive me

2Mickennxtre68 responds:

Thanks

[Make Me Laugh!]

Queen laughs starts getting weird at the end xd

[The Gatekeeper]

I was going to say you got better, and you did but this is still a waste of time
Stop doing so many cliffhangers and leaving the game shorter than it makes the player expect to be, you could just put more cases in the game or at least give the opportunity to enter to the room

I hate this, I could say you got better just that the ghost looked to cartoonish so it wasn't at all creepy and it loses the seriousness of the situation
3, just because you got better and I didn't like the other ones, I like this one but it piss off and is a bummer how this ends

[The Painted Lady]

While others say is great, I think is awful, I mean I can't even read the diary and I don't care if she is a prostitute and she owes money, there is nothing relevant in that
Of course if that was in real life, I would feel empathy (Expect news, I am not a fan and I don't take news very seriously and I am very critical about them)

Well, I will give you a 3.5, this is a waste of time but hey, artwork was pretty cool and I guess I just can't understand the story specially with that horrible writing in the diary, maybe if it was more clear to read them it would be cool

[S.W.A.P.]

I couldn't get past the second level, I hate it, not enough instrutions and there is a high probability that the green balls dissapears after you try to warp with them

[No More Skies DEMO]

Buen juego, solo trata de ponerlo en ingles para que asi todos entiendan ya que en esta gente hay mucha gente que habla ingles (si tu quieres te ayudo a traducir)

Esta bueno el juego, pero todos los niveles son iguales, lo unico diferente son los enemigos, mi recomendacion seria mas enemigos, niveles que no sean casi exactamente igual, y que hayan varios tipos de armas y crafteos ya que esos crafteos como que no valen mucho la pena, es necesario si se te acaban las balas pero igual
Te doy 3 estrellas

[The Roomies!]

10/10 man

[Covert Front 4]

I am really confused.... what happens now? she disappears o what? I don't understand